Question

书面表达（满分30分）

随着人们环保意识的提高，越来越多的人选择低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）。假设你是校英语协会主席李华，请写一篇英语倡议书，从出行、购物、用水、用电四个方面倡议同学们选择低碳生活。

注意：1．词数；l20左右；

2．开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数：

3．参考词汇：排放emission

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Dear fellow students, let's take action right now!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students，

     The earth is faced with serious pollution and energy shortage. It is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. I think everyone should take an active part.

     First of all, we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Second, when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. And it’ s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. Last but not least, we should turn off the tap after we use the running water. If we can make a small change in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth!

Dear fellow students, let’s take action right now!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是应用文中常见的倡议书。话题是呼吁中学生要“低碳生活”。有很强的可写性，，内容贴近考生的实际情况，考生有话可说，有话可写。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如： Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点。

【亮点说明】It is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. 这句话用了It is time for sb to do sth对某人来说正是做…的时候了，和in order to do做目的状语， we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce这句话用了instead of词组when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. 这句话用的是状语从句的省略式和非限制性定语从句And it’ s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. 这句话用的是it做形式主语的句子，还有文章还用了First of all, Second,  Last but not least,这样的关联词，使文章更连贯。

考点：考查倡议书的写作