Question

【题目】英语写作,请根据以下提示，结合具体事例用英语写一篇短文。

When we grow up, we often get a lot of love, support and help from our teachers, friends as well as our parents. However, we seldom express our gratitude to them. Being grateful to others is what we shouldn’t forget.

注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限； ③文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称； ④词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

As middle school students, not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities. I think expressing our gratitude to people who helped us is one of the good qualities we must possess.

Talking of gratitude , my classmate’s experience never escapes me. Two years ago, my classmate, Wang Wei ran into difficulty because his father was diagnosed with lung cancer. His father’s illness added to his family’s trouble, so Wang Wei was in danger of dropping out of school. After learning about his bad situation, our head teacher gave him timely help by allowing him to continue his schooling without any tuition. With the help of the teachers and classmates Wang Wei finished school. Just before this important exam he wrote us a letter expressing his sincere thanks for what we had done. We were deeply moved by his letter. It was then that we realized our kindness meant so much.

Wang Wei ‘s story reminds us to be grateful to people who helped and supported us. In fact ,being grateful to all surrounding us can make us optimistic about our life.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给内容给家长、父母和朋友写一封感谢信，表达自己的感激之情。

写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，第一段写了我们要有感激之情；第二段讲了一个具体例子讲述感恩的重要性；最后一段讲感恩的重要性。短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如定语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、强调句型的用法。acquire knowledge，expressing our gratitude，in danger of，With the help of，reminds等词汇。