Question

12．假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英语编辑，请你以学生会的名义用英文以"An English Editor Wanted"为题目写一则招聘启事．要点如下：
1．该工作主要包括两部分：
   1）从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；
   2）选择与编辑同学们的来稿．
2．希望该同学应满足下列要求：
   1）乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务；
   2）英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑．
3．感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（Students'Union）联系．
参考词汇：满足要求 meet the requirements     
美术 art
注意：1）词数100左右
      2）不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．
An English Editor Wanted
    Our school newspaper is in great need of an English editor．                                 
                                                                                    

Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，且是一则招聘启事，所以要用第二人称来写．需要些的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数100左右，不要太多也不要太少．
  高级词汇及句式
   be suitable for  适合
   apply for   申请
   are willing to 愿意
   skillfully  熟练的
   高分句式一  One is to choose English articles which are suitable for the students from other newspapers，English magazines and the Internet． （定语从句）
   高分句式二  Second，it's necessary for you to be good at both English and art．（it充当形式主语）

解答 An English Editor Wanted
     Our school newspaper is in great need of an English editor．The editor's job mainly includes two parts．One is to choose English articles which are suitable for the students from other newspapers，English magazines and the Internet．高分句式一  The other is to pick out articles from our students and edit them for use．
     If you want to apply for the job，you must meet the following requirements．First，you are willing to devote some of your spare time to serving the students．Second，it's necessary for you to be good at both English and art．高分句式二  Meanwhile，you should be able to use the computer skillfully．
     Those who are interested in the job，please get in touch with the Students'Union this week．Thanks．
                                                                                                                                                                                    Students'Union

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．