Question

【题目】写作

目前，学校存在少数考生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

主要原因	考试偏多、偏难
	不用功、懒惰
	取悦父母、老师
个人看法	作弊不对，违反校规
	……（其他看法）

注意：

1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

2．词数：100左右；

3．参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v. ）。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations, which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of the students are too lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons or studies. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please both parents and teachers.In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest to try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，说明对考试作弊现象的观点。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的2个方面（1.原因；2. 个人观点）的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时说明情况。分别以第三人称和第一人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，用On the other hand, so，What’s more和 In my opinion使层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如非谓语动词when taking examinations, it is wrong to cheat 和非限制性定语从句which are too difficult for us.。还有短语instead of, get well prepared for等。