Question

【题目】

假如你是高中三年级的学生李华，你在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。

请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如下图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计人总词数

2．词数为80左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---"To whom do you go when in trouble?" The results are as follows.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Reference version:

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows.

61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business. They find it hard to get along with others.

It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example. However, some general comments can be made. It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.

【解析】 本文是应用文，要求学生怎样诉说烦恼谈自己的看法，故应用一般现在时和第一人称。

文章使用了一般现在时兼有灵活使用连词等，且使用得当，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了when引导的时间状语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，that引导的表语从句，find it +形容词 +不定式的结构应用等；高级短语base on，be rich in等；还使用了Nevertheless，however等关联词以及It is +形容词 +不定式句型的灵活运用。全文灵活应用各类复杂语法知识，要点陈述全，和前后连贯。文章一气呵成，堪称佳作。