Question

1．自行车是公认的绿色交通工具，也是我过最普通的交通工具．但随着中国汽车拥有量的不断增加，自行车出行受到了很大的冲击．假如你是李华，真正参加学校举办的演讲比赛，请根据以下要点写一篇讲演稿，呼吁大家骑自行车，享受低碳生活．
内容要点：
1．对环境的影响；2．对能源的消耗3．对健康的影响
注意
1．词数：100字左右2．开头已经写出．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
          ．
So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles
然而，在我看来，我们应该鼓励更多的人坚持骑自行车．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．第三，骑自行车多我们的身体有好处．
句型一 in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles 该句中使用了以下重要的短语和固定搭配：in one's opinion 在某人看来   encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
句型二 riding bicycles does good to our health 该句的主语为现在分词短语充当，此时应注意谓语使用单数，且该句谓语部分使用了一个固定短语：do good to 对．．有好处

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
   With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
   However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles．（高分句型一）Firstly，bicycles cause little pollution to the environment．Since a bicycle is much quieter than motorcycle，it doesn't cause noise pollution．Moreover，a bicycle never sends out harmful gas into the air．secondly，either in the process of making bicycles or using them，they consume much less energy than motorcycles．Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．（高分句型二）It is an effective method available to do physical training．riding bicycles can build our body and keep us fit．（阐述理由）
   Due to the reasons mentioned above，it can be concluded that riding bicycles is really good for the individual as well as the whole society．So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？（提出倡议）
   Thank you!

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．