Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍上周末你陪同交换生游览长城的完整过程，并以“Our Trip to the Great Wall”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。词数不少于60。

Our Trip to the Great Wall

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Answer 1

【答案】Our Trip to the Great Wall

Last weekend, I accompanied two exchange students to the Great Wall, which proved to be a very pleasant trip.

Early on Saturday morning, we got on the bus happily. Everyone was excited, discussing what we had known about the Great Wall, including anecdotes and legends. Two hours later we got to our destination, and everyone couldn’t wait to start climbing. We spent the next few hours on the Great Wall, stopping from time to time to take photos and appreciate its magnificence as well as the breathtaking scenery around it. Then we went to the Great Wall Museum nearby. It contains exhibitions showing the history of the Great Wall and the social landscape along it, from which we got a better understanding of the Great Wall. Time passed quickly! It was noon before we knew it. Before leaving, we took a group selfie to record this unforgettable moment. Excitement was written on everyone’s face.

It was really an impressive trip and I really felt proud of this world wonder.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于看图作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇看图作文：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍上周末你陪同交换生游览长城的完整过程，并以“Our Trip to the Great Wall”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：proved to be a very pleasant trip（证明是一次非常愉快的旅行）；got on the bus happily（高兴地上车）；including anecdotes and legends（包括奇闻轶事和传奇）；record this unforgettable moment（记录下这难忘的时刻）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。