Question

【题目】假设你是中学生李华。下面四幅图记录了周日你在人民公园踏青的经历。请据图用英语写一篇日记。

注意：词数100左右。

Sunday, May4 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】Sunday, May 4 Fine

It was a sunny day today and I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing. The moment I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight. Attracted by the beauty, I couldn’t stop taking photos. As I wandered along the path, enjoying the beautiful view, I notices something unpleasant. Two schoolgirls jumped over the fence to pick flowers and climb the tree. Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior had done great damage to the beauty of the park. Without hesitation, I went up and stopped them politely. Quite embarrassed, the two girls came out immediately. Then they took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smiled and everything looked nicer in my eyes.

【解析】这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1. 认真读图，可知四幅图记录了周日你在人民公园踏青的经历，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态，讲述上周日的事情用过去时为基本时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的提示。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【亮点说明】

The moment I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight.我一进入公园，就看到了各种美丽的花和绿树。句中The moment引导状语从句I entered the park表示“一…就…”。

Obviously they didn’t realize that their behavior had done great damage to the beauty of the park.显然，他们没有意识到他们的行为对公园的美丽造成了极大的损害。句子里that引导宾语从句。