Question

【题目】假定英语课上，老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to accept your last letter. Thanks for your concern about the heavy haze affecting normal teaching activities in our school. We have actual taken several practical measures to handle.

To begin with, attach great importance to the health of the young, our government has fixed a set of equipments to provide fresh air in our school, that can basically solve the problem. In addition to, parents donate lots of air purifiers. However, inside the buildings of our school, we did have fresh and refined air. Besides these, our school avoids outdoor activities when haze attacks.

I do believe a disturbing issue will be solved pretty soon in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. accept→receive

2. actual→actually

3. handle后加it

4. attach→attaching

5. equipments→equipment

6. that→which

7. 去掉to

8. However→Thus/Therefore

9. did→do

10. a→the

【解析】第一处，考查动词词义。accept为“接受”的意思，receive为“收到”的意思。根据句子意思应该是收到信，故将accept改为receive。

第二处，考查副词。副词修饰动词taken，故将actual改为actually。

第三处，考查动词。handle为及物动词，后面要加宾语，故添加it。

第四处，考查非谓语动词短语作状语。应该用动词attach的进行时态，故将attach改为attaching。

第五处，考查名词。equipment不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将equipments改为equipment。

第六处，考查非限制性定语从句。"our government has fixed a set of equipments to provide fresh air in our school, that can basically solve the problem"非限制性定语从句不能用that引导，根据代指前一句话的内容，故将that改为which。

第七处，考查固定词组。in addition为固定搭配，为“此外”的意思，故将to去掉。

第八处，考查介词。根据前后意思，“父母们捐赠很多空气净化器”和“在我们学校里面我们能够享受到新鲜的空气”，应该是因果关系，故将however改为thus/therefore。

第九处，考查时态。由于文章总体时态为一般现在时，本句也为一般现在时，故将did改为do。

第十处，考查冠词。"I do believe a disturbing issue"此处的所指问题是特指上文提到的空气问题，不定冠词a不能表示特指，故将a改为the。