Question

【题目】假设你是李华， 准备参加学校举办的主题为“ 健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文， 主要内容包括;

1. 乐观的人生态度；

2. 努力学习；

3. 参加体育锻炼。

生词：态度 attitude

注意： 1. 词数:100词左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3. 开头已为你写好，不计入词数。

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things._________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】这是一篇主题作文，以健康成长为主题。主要内容包括乐观的人生态度，努力学习，以及参加体育锻炼。大致内容已经给出，要适当增加细节内容，保持文章结构完整，内容连贯。文章第二段第一句Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life.使用了连词fistly，给人清晰的结构感；第二段第二句Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.使用了not only……but also……句型，是一大亮点；第二段第三句We should be brave in front of difficulties，第二段第四句Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.句中secondly使得层次清晰。第二段第五句If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.使用了条件状语从句，使得文章更有可读性。第二段第六句In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.本句使用了in order to表目的，以及so that句型；第二段第七句We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.使用了并列动宾短语，使得文章更有气势；最后一句If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily再次使用了条件状语从句。在词语的运用上，也十分出彩，使用了consist of由……组成，be able to能够做某事，grow up长大，do well做得好，develop a good attitude to养成了对什么的好态度，in front of在……的前面，keep fit保持身材。在词语运用上，文章运用了精准的词汇，如develop来表达养成习惯。除此之外，文章还应用了一句名言“knowledge is power”知识就是力量，简单却一语中的，也是文章的亮点之一。