Question

10．假设你是高三（1）班的学生李华，你校网站刊登了一则"走进英国家庭"活动的通知．
你想参加该活动．请用英语给该活动负责人张老师发一封电子邮件申请参加．
    内容主要包括：
    1．你参加该活动的目的；
    2．你的兴趣、特长；
    3．你希望走进什么样的家庭．
    注意：1．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
    2．词数100左右．短文开头已为你写好，不计入词数．
Dear Mr Zhang，
    I am Li Hua，a student from Class l，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity because
                                                           
    Looking forward to your early replay．
    Yours sincerely
    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
  If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．如果我很幸运的拥有了这次机会，我希望我能住在一个对我友好并且乐意带我到附近熟悉地方的家庭．
句型二：
I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．如果您能帮我实现梦想，我将非常感激．
句型一family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．该句是一个由that引导的定语从句，that在句中充当主语，替代前面出现的先行词family
句型二 I would appreciate it if you could help…该句的重点是使用了it 位于appreciate后，充当形式宾语，真正的宾语由if引导的条件状语从句充当．

解答 Dear Mr Zhang，
   I'm Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity because I think it a good opportunity for me to improve my English and I can also learn more about British history and its culture．
   I have many hobbies，for example，Iike surfing the internet and doing sports．My favorite sport is basketball and I often play it on weekends．Besides，I am good at drawing and I like listening to music．（自我介绍）
   If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．（高分句型一）I am sure I can get along well with my host family．I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．（高分句型二）（提出感谢）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours Sincerely
 Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路．考生在写作时应注意结合主题，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文阐述清楚．