Question

4．最近，网络上有人发起了一份有关老人摔倒后你是否会扶的调查问卷．请你根据下列图示用英语写一篇短文发表在学校的英语报上．

1．简要描述图画内容；
2．分析调查结果；
3．提出你的看法．
注意：
1．词数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
They think helping others，especially those who are in trouble，is Chinese traditional virtue．
他们认为帮助他人尤其是那种陷入麻烦的人是中华民族的传统美德．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down．
在我看来，我们应该尽我们的最大努力去帮助老人当他们摔倒的时候．
句型一  those who are in trouble 该句是一个由who引导的定语从句，who在从句中充当主语，替代先行词those
句型二 we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down..该句的谓语部分使用了重要的短语：make every effort to do sth 尽力做某事 when they fall down 该句为when引导的时间状语从句

解答 Recently a website carried out a survey about"Whether we should help old people get up when they fall down"among their students．（提出主题）
   The survey shows that 19% of the students offered a positive answer．They think helping others，especially those who are in trouble，is Chinese traditional virtue．（高分句型一）About 42% of them are unwilling to help those old people who fall down．Soem think because they lack medical knowledge，they can't give those old people help，or that can even cause further injures．The others are afraid of extra trouble．For example they are afraid they are cheated．The left people say it's difficult to decide whehter should they offer the help．（说明原因）
   In my opinion，we should make every effort to help old people when they fall down．（高分句型二） It's our responsibility to help others，especially old people and children when they need help．If we lack medical knowledge，we should help them call their family or call 120．（提出建议）

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．