Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

Answer 1

【小题1】some改为one
【小题2】there改为where
【小题3】surprised改为surprise
【小题4】were改为was
【小题5】me 改成mine
【小题6】but 改为so
【小题7】practise改为practising
【小题8】去掉from
【小题9】go改为going
【小题10】在communicate和some之间加上with

解析试题分析：短文改错题
【小题1】some改为one；some day是指未来的某一天，次处应指的是有一天，故 some改为one
【小题2】there改为where；考查定语从句，这里的where应该是指代的前面的chatting room，为地点，故there改为where
【小题3】surprised改为surprise；to my surprise是固定搭配，故surprised改为surprise
【小题4】were改为was；the oral English of some junior students指的是一些初级学生的口语水平，谓语动词应用单数，故were改为was
【小题5】me 改成mine；me是宾格，mine是物主代词，意为我的，故me 改成mine
【小题6】but 改为so；此处明显为因果关系，故but 改为so
【小题7】practise改为practising；spend后面加动词的ing形式，故practise改为practising
【小题8】去掉from；learn from 是从.......中学到，而这里表示学到........，故去掉from
【小题9】go改为going；考查with的复合结构表伴随，作为状语，故go改为going
【小题10】在communicate和some之间加上with；communicate with sb.是固定搭配，此处缺少介词，故在communicate和some之间加上with
考点：考查短文改错