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12．为了吸引更多的留学生到你校学习，校学生会决定拍摄一部反映学校生活的小电影，现在招募学生演员．请你以学生会的名义，根据以下提示撰写一个通知．
（1）此次活动的目的；
（2）演员需要具备的条件：沟通能力强，擅长英语…（可以适当发挥）；
（3）小电影的内容简介；
（4）最后报名期限：下周一前到学生会报名．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）通知格式己给出，不计入总词数．
NOTICE
In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
If you want to show your talent in this film，you need to have some related qualities．First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二） Besides，you must be good at English，especially spoken English．What's more，if you have ever participated in similar activities before，it will be an advantage．
The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三） If you are interested in this activity，please sign up for it at the Students'Union before next Monday．We are expecting your participation and contribution．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息为了吸引更多的留学生到你校学习，校学生会决定拍摄一部反映学校生活的小电影，现在招募学生演员．请你以学生会的名义，根据以下提示撰写一个通知，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）此次活动的目的；（2）演员需要具备的条件：沟通能力强，擅长英语…（可以适当发挥）；（3）小电影的内容简介；（4）最后报名期限：下周一前到学生会报名． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in order to 以便，为了；first of all首先；besides另外；what's more而且；sign up 报名；
In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
 First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二
  The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三）

解答 Notice
      In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school，our Students'Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school．（高分句型一）
      If you want to show your talent in this film，you need to have some related qualities．First of all，you need to have a good communicating ability so that you shall cooperate well with the whole team．（高分句型二） Besides，you must be good at English，especially spoken English．What's more，if you have ever participated in similar activities before，it will be an advantage．
      The main contents of the film are about our campus life，such as having lessons in class，playing basketball in stadium，having lunch in the dinning hall and so on．（高分句型三） If you are interested in this activity，please sign up for it at the Students'Union before next Monday．We are expecting your participation and contribution．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       The Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．