Question

【题目】假如你是某校高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Helen最近写信向你倾诉她的烦恼。得知她最近因学习压力大开始失眠，学习效率也降低后，你决定给她一些建议加以鼓励。请你根据以下要点提示用英文回信：

turn to your close friends for help…

keep a positive attitude …

take part in sports…

listen to music…

注意：1.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.词数100左右。

Dear Helen,

I was very glad to receive your letter. ___________________________________________________

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With best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Helen,

I was very glad to receive your letter. At the same time, I felt sad to hear that you were suffering in your studies. Here I’d like to share some advice with you on how to study efficiently.

Firstly, you can talk with some close friends about your problems and ask them for help. This is an important way to deal with your problems directly. Secondly, try to study in a positive way, as this will decrease your pressure, making studying an easy job. Thirdly, spend time doing exercise, which can not only build up our body, but also refresh our mind. Lastly, you can listen to your favorite music when possible. I really hope my advice can be of some benefit to you.

With best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】根据提示，假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Helen最近写信向你倾诉她的烦恼。你决定给她一些建议加以鼓励。在写作时要注意以下几点：1.弄清提示所提供的所有信息，要点包括：遇到的烦恼；给出建议；鼓励她。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序来写。3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

亮点句子：

Here I’d like to share some advice with you on how to study efficiently.短语share some advice with somebody与某人分享建议。How to study efficiently疑问词+动词不定式作介词on的宾语。

使用firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastly来是文章叙述顺序更清晰。

Thirdly, spend time doing exercise, which can not only build up our body, but also refresh our mind.which引导非限制性定语从句；not only…but also…不但…而且…，连接两个并列的谓语动词。