Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.

As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a young guy who belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty than the former generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford. Now plenty of girls would prefer to marry man with a house and a car on his own. I don’t think love built on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.

Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future?

Answer 1

改错答案

Hi, everyone. Glad to be here.

As you know, in China, we call people bear between 1980 and 1989 the post-80s. I am a

                                 (bear 改成born)

young guy who belonged to such a group. For our generation, life is getting more difficulty

belongs （全文现在时）                 difficult（此处为形容词比较级形式）

than the former generations. The job market is tough but the house is kind of expensive to afford.

but 改成 and（并列关系）

Now plenty of girls would prefer to marry /\ man with a house and a car  on  his own. I don’t

a（man可数名词）           of（of one's own属于某人）

think love built on houses and cars are true love. Thus, this is social reality that we have to face.

                          is（cars复数） However（转折）

Though situations are tough today, many of us post-80s are making many effort to live a good

                                                            efforts（可数名词）

life. Do you think we will make up life better and better in the future

                       up 去掉（make life better 让生活更美好）