Question

8．就你读过的一本书，写一篇读后感．具体要求如下：
1．写出书名及作者； 2．简要介绍书中你感兴趣的人物或情节； 3．说明感兴趣的理由．
          

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇读后感，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：就你读过的一本书，写一篇读后感．写出书名及作者；简要介绍书中你感兴趣的人物或情节； 说明感兴趣的理由．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分介绍书名及作者．第二部分为介绍书中你感兴趣的人物或情节； 说明感兴趣的理由．
重点短语与句型：
live a hard life过艰难的生活
 hold a belief  持有一个观点
 stick to坚持
 achieve one's dream实现梦想
高分句型一：These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre，which attracts me a lot．非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：She had two sisters and one brother，but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young时间状语从句
高分句型三：What impresses me most is her saying"I have as much soul as you，and full as much heart!And if
God had gifted me with some beauty and much wealth，I should have made it as hard for you to leave
me，as it is now for me to leave you．"此句为what引导的主语从句

解答 These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre，which attracts me a lot．The book's writer
is called Charlotte Bronte，who was born in England in 1816．She had two sisters and one brother，but
unfortunately their mother died when they were very young．（介绍书名及作者）
Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love．In the story．Jane Eyre lived a hard life，but she
was self-confident and perseverant．In her heart，there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick
to it，you will eventually achieve your dream．（介绍书中你感兴趣的人物或情节）
What impresses me most is her saying"I have as much soul as you，and full as much heart!And if
God had gifted me with some beauty and much wealth，I should have made it as hard for you to leave
me，as it is now for me to leave you．"From the book Jane Eyre，I have learnt a lot，which will push me further in my life．（ 说明感兴趣的理由）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．