Question

【题目】假如你是李华。你打算邀请在你校学习的英国交换生Mike周末外出游玩一天。请你根据以下要点给Mike发一封邮件：

1.发出邀请；

2.日程安排及理由；

3.询问对方意见。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I am writing to invite you to go out for a day on weekends. Here is a brief schedule.

Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set off a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us. Of course, a bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.

If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us. Do you have any suggestions for this outing?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请英国交换生Mike周末外出游玩一天。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 发出邀请

2. 日程安排及理由；询问对方意见。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

go out；on weekends；in the center of；set out；Aiming to；along with sb.；of course；ahead of；require to do

第三步：连词成句

1. Here is a brief schedule.

2. Since we are living in the center of the city, we need to set out a little bit earlier, at about 6 am, and return at about 5 pm.

3. Aiming to relax ourselves, several activities are arranged, including fishing, swimming and barbecue.

4. Considering the food safety, we will bring fresh water, foods and snacks along with us.

5. A bus is booked ahead of time, and what you are required to do is to be at the school gate on time.

6. If it is convenient for you, I do hope you will come to join us.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改