Question

【题目】Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, it’s important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. It’s up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.

Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的图样), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.

The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others don’t like to be scared, so you should not scare others either.

Following the laws is good citizenship. Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games. If a child doesn’t want to follow, it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child. Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need to obey the law when they become adults.

【写作内容】

1． 以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点；

2． 不少城市在创建文明城市。请以约120个词谈我们如何成为文明市民。

内容包括：

（1） 你认为文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 应具备什么素质，列举两三种文明行为；

（2） 作为中学生，谈谈你应如何从小事做起，为创建文明城市作贡献。

【写作要求】

1．可以使用实例来支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

1.The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens. Therefore, he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves, to respect others and follow the laws.

2.As far as I am concerned, a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others. In public places, such as restaurants, stations or hospitals, a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly. Besides, a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands. Last but not the least, a civilized citizen should be aware of the significance of obeying the law.

As a senior high school student, I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life. For example, I will pick up rubbish on the ground and put it into the dustbin. On my way to school, I will follow the traffic rules. All in all, I will do what I am expected to do. Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，1.以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容要点2.根据材料中提示并结合事例谈谈我们如何成为文明市民。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。要求写约120个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：illustrate 、As far as I am concerned, 、is supposed to 、Last but not the least,、what引导的宾语从句、Only引导的倒装句等都很不错。