Question

最近，越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍。请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点。词数100左右。
1. 学习时间；  2. 安全；  3. 自由性；  4. 与同学交往；  5. 学习效果。
注意：可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理由都至少要有两条。
要求：字迹工整，段落清晰。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

不唯一
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of cause it is safer.
A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone , it’s better for studyas you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.
As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

解析试题分析：本文是一篇议论文，首先表明租房和住大宿舍有什么优点和缺点，将对此现象表明自己的观点提升为要点，更为重要进行阐述，再举例对自己支持与否的说明，写作中使用万能句型造句，写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等。
考点：提纲作文
点评：提醒考生应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。