Question

3．最近，你校英文报在举办主题为"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活动．假定你是李华，请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文．
    1．你对征文主题的理解；
    2．你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况；
    3．该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处．
注意：
    1．词数100左右；
    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
    3．开头语已写好，不计入总词数．
Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇英语短文．就校英文报在举办主题为"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活动阐述自己的理解．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．你对征文主题的理解；2．你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况3．该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处．
重要短语：become more and more popular （变得越来越流行，受欢迎），keep on doing（一直做…），take exercises（锻炼），keep fit（保持健康），live a happy life（过着开心的生活），build up（增强），exhausting study（疲劳的学习），refresh oneself （提神，清醒头脑），the spirit of teamwork（团队精神），enrich one's life（丰富某人的生活），enjoy a healthy life（享受健康的生活）．
【高分句型一】
1．Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
此处是动名词短语"having sports"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型二】
2．①As we know，a person②who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．
①此处为"as"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life"．
②此处为"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a person"，"who"在定语从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
3．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．【高分句型一】As we know，a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．【高分句型二】（你对征文主题的理解）
       My favorite sport is playing basketball．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．【高分句型三】（你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况）Playing basketball helps me relax after a period of exhausting study and improves my study efficiency．Besides，through the game，I have learned the spirit of teamwork．It is also a good way for me to make new friends．In short，playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident．（该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处）
       Come on!Let's do sports together and enjoy a healthy life!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．