Question

6．假设你是新华中学的高一学生李华，请阅读以下一位美国学生的来信并对其进行回复．
Dear Li Hua，
My name is Martha．I'm 16years old and I live in New York．I'm in tenth grade in Senior High school．My favorite subjects are history and Spanish．I'm also studying Chinese in evening class．
I'm writing to teenagers all over the world．I have some questions about your first year at Senior High school．Would you mind answering the questions for me？
•What is your first impression of your Senior High school？
•What is your impression of your English teacher？
•What is your English class like？
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Martha
注意：
1．词数100-120；
2．信件的格式已给出，不计入总词数．
3．文中不得透露有关你个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Dear Martha，
                                                       
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to improve my interest and ablity，I watch many American films in my spare time．
高分句型二：
The first activity which I took part in was playing balls．
句型一 In order to improve my interest and ablity 该部分使用了固定短语 in order to do sth为了做某事，位于句首，用作目的状语
句型二  activity which I took part in 该句是一个由which引导的定语从句，which在从句中作动词短语take part in 的宾语，which替代先行词activity
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
take part in 参加    keep in touch 保持联系  hang out 外出
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 Dear Martha，
     I'm so glad to receive your mail．My name is Emma and I'm also a teeneger girl in the Senior High school．I have study English since I was 10 years old and I like it very much．In order to improve my interest and ablity，I watch many American films in my spare time．（高分句型一）
     My memory of school was the big lawn in my school．It's really big enough for our young students to play in there，We run and sing，Fortunely we sometimes catch some insects which hided in the grass．It's a wonderful free memory and I never forget that happy days．The first activity which I took part in was playing balls．（高分句型二）Our class hold a competition and we dribble balls to see who can dribble the most in one minute．（对学校的印象）
     My first teacher is Mrs，Chen．She is a very kind lady and told us many funny stories．She was always patient for our strange questions．My first best friend is Lisa，we knew each other since I came to primary school．We can share everthing including some secrets．We are not go to the same Senior High school now but we keep in touch by telephone．And we like hanging out together in weekends or holidays．（英语课堂和英语老师介绍）
                                                                                                                                         Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为读写任务型作文，该篇作文规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．