Question

【题目】最近，高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇不少于150词的英语短文。

写作要求：

1.介绍调查结果；

2.阐述产生如此结果的原因，可举例说明；

3.就如何合理分配各科作业时间提出自己的看法。

注意： 1.短文的开头已为你写好。

Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.

The results are as follows:

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.

The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.

Undoubtedly, the results reflect the position of each subject in Gaokao. As one of the fundamental subjects, math always comes first in all subjects. Besides, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense exists of achievement in it. By contrast, some students, especially boys, find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.

However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇调查报告。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇调查报告：最近，高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查，结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇不少于150词的英语短文。写作要求：介绍调查结果；阐述产生如此结果的原因，可举例说明；就如何合理分配各科作业时间提出自己的看法。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：as follows（正如下面所示）；most significant（最有意义）；Undoubtedly,（毋容置疑）；of the same value（同样的价值）；in a balanced way（用一种平衡的方法）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇看图作文。内容符合饼状图的含义，要点明确，结构布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most importan句中使用while表示比较；English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants,句中使用被动语态；hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense exists of achievement in it 句中使用that引导的同位语从句；find it hard to obtain immediate results when doing Chinese and English homework.句中it做形式宾语，动词不定式做真正的宾语；另外，as follows，Meanwhile, Undoubtedly, Besides, By contrast, However, Therefore等的运用为文章增色添彩。