Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友John对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点如下：

1.鼓励其广交朋友；

2.积极参加体育活动，强身健体；

3.努力奋斗进入理想大学。

注意：1.可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；

2.词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数）。

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I’m so pleased to hear that you’ve been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you.

Firstly, a lift without a friend is a lift without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other. Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it’s our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.

I believe you’ll get used to it soon and wait for your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是写一封信，首先要认真审题和分析所给的提纲。本文的主题是如何尽快适应高一的生活。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性，同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子：a lift without a friend is a lift without a sun.（人生在世无朋友，犹如生活没阳光）；adjust yourself（自我调整），why not do something（表示向对方提建议），take an active part in（积极参加）， make sure（确保），help each other（互相帮忙），come true（成为现实），get used to（适应）；Here are some good tips for you. 是倒装句，so that we can get into shape.是目的状语从句，which will surely be good for our further study.是非限制性定语从句，that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true.是宾语从句。