The first attempt of even the most talented artists, musicians, and writers is seldom a masterpiece. If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals (彩排), or tryouts, revising will seem a natural part of the writing ___21___.
What is the purpose of the dress rehearsals and the out-of-town previews that many Broadway shows go through? The answer is adding, deleting, replacing, reordering, __22___ revising. Andrew Lloyd Webber's musical Phantom of the Opera underwent（经历）such a process.
When Lloyd Webber began writing in 1984, he had in mind a funny, exciting production. However, when Phantom opened in London in 1986, the audience saw a moving psychological love story set to music. The musical had ___23___ several revisions due to problems with costuming andmakeup (戏服和化妆). For instance, Lloyd Webber ___24___ some of the music because the Phantom's makeup prevented the actor from singing certain sounds.
When you revise, you change aspects of your work in ___25___ to your evolving(不断演变的) purpose, or to include ___26___ ideas or newly discovered information.
Revision is not just an afterthought that gets only as much time as you have at the end of an assignment. ___27___, it is a major stage of the writing process, and writers revise every step of the way. Even your decision to ___28___ topics while prewriting is a type of revising. However, don't make the mistake of skipping the revision stage that follows training. Always make time to become your own __29__and view your dress rehearsal, so to speak. Reviewing your work in this way can give you ___30___ new ideas.
Revising involves __31__ the effectiveness and appropriateness（恰当）of all aspects of your writing, making your purpose more ___32____, and refocusing or developing the facts and ideas you present. When you revise, ask yourself the following questions, keeping in mind the audience for whom you are writing: Is my main idea or purpose ___33__ throughout my draft? Do I ever lose sight of my purpose? Have I given my readers all of the __34___; that is, facts, opinions, inferences --- that they need in order to understand my main idea? Finally, have I included too many___35___ details that may confuse readers?
1. A．technique B．style C．process D．career
2. A．in particular B．as a result C．for example D．in other words
3. A．undergone B．skipped C．rejected D．replaced
4. A．rewrote B．released C．recorded D．reserved
5. A．addition B．response C．opposition D．contrast
6. A．fixed B．ambitious C．familiar D．fresh
7. A．However B．Moreover C．Instead D．Therefore
8. A．discuss B．switch C．exhaust D．cover
9. A．director B．master C．audience D．visitor
10. A．personal B．valuable C．basic D．delicate
11. A．mixing B．weakening C．maintaining D．assessing
12. A．specifically B．freshly C．swiftly D．loosely
13. A．amazing B．bright C．unique D．clear
14. A．angles B．evidence C．information D．hints
15. A．unnecessary B．uninteresting C．concrete D．final
1.C
2.D
3.A
4.A
5.B
6.D
7.B
8.B
9.C
10.B
11.A
12.A
13.D
14.C
15.A
【解析】
试题分析：修改是作品写作过程中非常重要且必须的步骤。文章讲叙了作品修改的目的和途径。
1.考查名词辨析,参照下文的“Andrew Lloyd Webber's musical Phantom of the Opera underwent such a process.”和“However. don't make the mistake of skipping the revision stage”。名词technique（技术）、style（风格）、career（事业、生涯）都不符题意。选C。
2.考查介词短语辨析，前面adding, deleting, replacing, reordering都是revising的方面，所以revising和这些名词同义；介词短语in other words表示“换句话说”。介词短语in particular（尤其、特别表强调）、as a result（因此，表结果）、for example（例如，表举例说明）都不符题意。选D。
3.考查动词辨析，动词skip（跳远）、reject（拒绝、抵制）replace（取代）都不符题意。人们观看的是完美的表演，但表演之前作品经历了（undergo）多次修改，与上段的“Andrew Lloyd Webber's musical Phantom of the Opera underwent such a process.”对应。选A。
4.考查动词辨析，动词release（释放、赦免、发行）、record（记录、录音）、reserve（保留、预订）都不符题意。动词rewrite表示“重写、修改”，与动词revise同义，与本篇文话题相关。选A。
5.考查介词短语辨析，介词短语in addition to表示“而且、除…之外还有”，in opposition to表示“与...的意见相反”，in contrast to表示“与...形成对比”，都与本题不符。in response to（作为对┄的反应）在本句表示“你修改作品是对你想改进作品目的的一种回应”选B。
6.考查形容词辨析，fresh ideas 与后面的newly discovered information对应。选D本题难度适中。
7.考查副词辨析，副词Moreover（而且）类似与but also表递进含义，与前面句not just（only）呼应。副词However（然而，表转折关系）、Instead（作为替代、反而，表相反含义）、Therefore（因此，表原因）都不符题意。B本题难度适中。
8.考查动词辨析，switch topics（变换标题）属于修改作品的一部分。动词discuss（讨论）、exhaust（汲干、使筋疲力尽）、cover（覆盖、包含）都不符题意。B本题难度适中。
9.考查名词辨析，，名词audience（观众）与下句view your dress rehearsal对应。名词director（导演）、master（主人、大师）、visitor（来访者）都与题意不符。选C。
10.考查形容词辨析，形容词valuable表示“做自己作品的观众能给你有价值的新信息”。形容词personal（个人的）、basic（基本的）、delicate（娇贵的、纤弱的、精美的）都与题意不符。选B。
11.考查动词辨析，，动词mix在本句表示“修改就是把作品所有方面的有效性和适当性融合在一起”。选A
12.考查副词：A. specifically专门地B. freshly新鲜地C. swiftly快速地D. loosely松散地，更加具体的制定目标，选A。
13.考查形容词辨析，形容词clear在本句表示“我的文章大意或写作意图是否清晰”，与下文confuse readers对应。形容词amazing（令人惊讶的）、bright（明亮的、聪明的）、unique（独特的）都与题意不符。选D。
14.考查名词辨析，后句名称facts、opinions、inferences都属于information，与上句newly discovered information对应。C本题难度适中。
15.考查形容词辨析， unnecessary details表示“多余的信息”反而使读者困惑、误导读者。uninteresting（单调的、乏味的）、concrete（具体的）、final（最终的、决定性的）都与题意不符。选A。
考点：考查文化类短文
点评：修改是作品写作过程中非常重要且必须的步骤。文章讲叙了作品修改的目的和途径。文章是有些难度的，但文章层次分明结构严谨，立足语篇，侧重通过上下文信息考查考生的综合运用英语的能力，注重语篇的理解，学生平时要培养自己驾驭语篇的能力，培养自己根据语篇综合运用英语的能力。
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