Question

假设你和你朋友在中山公园散步时遇到的一件事，请根据要求写一篇英语短文。

【写作内容】

 

时间	上星期六下午
地点	在中山公园的湖边
事件	我和朋友在散步，湖中一个小女孩在呼救。我们没来得及脱衣服就跳进湖中将她救上岸，对她做了人工呼吸，并在她恢复知觉后，送她去医院。我们还打电话通知她的家长。最终小女孩得救了。
评价	家长很感激，医生对我们的急救给予高度评价。
感受	懂得急救只是很重要。

 

参考词汇：急救 first aid

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

【评分标准】

结构准确、内容完整和篇章连贯。  _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Last Saturday afternoon, my friend and I were walking by the lake in Zhongshan Park when suddenly we heard a girl calling for help in the lake. We hurried to jump into the lake without taking off our clothes, swam towards her and pulled her out. Then we made her breathe using mouth-to-mouth way before she came to herself, sent her to hospital and telephoned her parents. Afterwards, we were told that the girl was saved because of the timely rescue.

Her parents were very thankful to us and the doctors thought highly of our first aid, which made us realize that knowing first aid is very important for everyone.

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架。选词造句，避难选易。在要点、层次明确的情况下，选用自己最熟悉的单词、句式进行造句．如果不会用复杂句就用简单句表达要点；必须用5句话能概括所有的要点。

考点：基础写作。

点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。