Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，今年18岁，想利用暑期打工，你在英文报纸上看到了咖啡厅的招聘广告。请根据下面的广告写一封求职信。

TEMPORARY JOB OFFER

Age 18-24

To work in busy center café.

Must enjoy working with people.

Previous experience necessary.

Good pay.

Tel. 01 222 643

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节；

3. 开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Sir,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir,

I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper. I am an eighteen-year-old student studying at Senior High school.

As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life. I’m available during the week so I have enough time for the work.

I once worked as a waiter for three months in a fast-food restaurant in my spare time, so I’m sure the working experience will qualify me for the position.

I’m outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers. Besides, I can play the piano and it can surely build up a warmer and more friendly atmosphere. I would be available for an interview at any time and I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封求职信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封求职信；假设你今年18岁，想利用暑期打工，你在英文报纸上看到了咖啡厅的招聘广告，根据招聘广告写一封求职信。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称使用第一人称。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apply for （申请），the position of a part-time waiter（兼职服务员的岗位），an eighteen-year-old student（一名18岁的学生），summer vocation（暑假），social experience（社会经验），enrich my life（丰富我的生活）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper.，I’m outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers.；时间状语从句As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。