Question

9．假如你是新华高中的学生李华，你给你初中的英语老师写一封信，汇报进入高中后你的英语学习情况和感受．内容包括：
1．初入高中时，觉得高中英语比初中英语难得多，没信心．
2．跟老师交谈后得到了一些学习方法，并认识到英语的重要性．
3．通过努力学习，英语已改善很多，并越来越喜欢学英语．
提示：初中junior high school    高中：senior high school
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Li，
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English learning since I became a senior high school student．
         ．
Wish you all the best．Yours．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达是要求写一封信，内容是讲述自己英语学习方面的情况．对此学生都有切身体会，而且所给提示信息较多，同学们只需适当增加细节，选择恰当的连接词把要点串联起来即可．同时一定要注意语言的自然流畅．为了使文章层次分明，可以使用at first，later，now 等词汇来避免要点的混乱．此外在写作时要注意运用第一人称，在时态选择上可以根据不同情况恰当使用一般过去时，一般现在时或现在进行时等．
【亮点说明】文章开篇提出写信的目的，告诉老师自己在高中的学习情况，然后在第二段讲述自己学习中所遇到的问题，最后提到自己目前的状态和对老师的感激，这种三段式的安排使文章层次分明，结构清晰．在句式方面，长短句的结合使文章语言更为生动，其中一些复合句的使用也显示了作者深厚的语言功底，如文章开头的I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student．而When I just started senior high English，I found it much difficult for me to learn English well，because it was different from what we had learned in junior high school这个句子运用到find it adj for sb to do 这个句型结构，what 引导from的宾语从句；Later，after talking with my English teacher，I got the right learning methods，which was very important for me．这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；

解答 Dear Mr．Li，
I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English learning since I became a senior high school student．
    When I just started senior high English，I found it much difficult for me to learn English well，because it was different from what we had learned in junior high school．As a result，I almost lost heart．Later，after talking with my English teacher，I got the right learning methods，which was very important for me．And I also came to realize the importance of English，so I worked harder at English than before．I was often busy in reciting some beautiful English sentences every day，and doing a lot of English reading after class．
    Now，I have improved my English greatly．And I'm getting more and more interested in learning it．Thank you so much for your great help in your class．
    Wish you all the best．
 Yours，
 Li Hua 

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．