Question

Dear Sir,

I am university student．I once thought life at the      76．_________

university must be excellent, but now I had changed my mind．          77．_________

I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move      78．_________

into the dormitory．Last term, I got along peacefully and  79．_________

happy．But I find they are not willing to be with me now．     80．_________

They don’t talk with me, so they’ve become cold toward      81．_________

me．Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what     82．_________

I felt like, but I failed to find an opening．When leaving   83．_________

alone, I am always recall this sadness．Why can’t I win true 84．_________

friendship? I’m lonely, and look forward to get your advice soon．       85．_________

                                                                   Yours,

                            Peter

Answer 1

76．am后加a。

77．had→have。

78．√

79．I →we

80．happy→happily

81．so→and。

82．time→times

83．leaving→left

84．去掉am。

85．get→getting。

解析:

76．am后加a。冠词的错误。单数可数名词前一定要有冠词；表示非定指加a。

77．had→have。时态的错误。这里应该用现在完成时表示延续到现在的动作。

78．√

79．I →we代词的错误。语境表示作者和室友相处很好，用we。

80．happy→happily词类的错误。用副词而不是形容词作状语。

81．so→and。连词的错误。用并列连词表示陈述多个事实。

82．time→times短语的错误。这里表示“几次”，用many times。

83．leaving→left非谓语动词的错误。语境表示被独自一人撇在一边时，用过去分词做状语。

84．去掉am。句式的错误。这里有动词recall(回忆)，前面的be动词是多余的。

85．get→getting。非谓语动词的错误。look forward to接动名词或名词、代词等做宾语。