Question

5．下面这幅漫画反映了目前家庭教育的一个侧面，请以Proper Family Education为题，用英语写一篇短文．根据漫画内容，结合目前的素质教育和新的人才观，谈谈你的看法．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
      2．参考词汇：素质教育quality education；人才观view of talent
 
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Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．根据对图片的理解及英语提示写一篇短文．首先描述图片点明主题，分析其含义，最后发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点部分
Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）本句有定语从句，holding属于现在分词作状语
Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）本句含有what引导的主语从句
Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）本句有only+状语引起半倒装

解答 Proper Family Education
     Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）He gets only 40 points．His father says angrily，"You can only become a worker in the future depending on your quality．"And his mother says，"Even become a peasant，I think．"What's your idea after seeing this cartoon？I disagree with his parents．
     First，in terms of quality education，their words are totally wrong．Because low points in exams doesn't mean poor qualities at all．Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）Second，in terms of view of talent，good workers and peasants are talents as well as so-called white-collar．They are just different categories of work．Who dare say we don't need skilled workers or peasants in our daily life？
     All in all，proper family education is urgently needed．Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．