Question

9．近期，某中学生英文报就"My dream classroom"向中学生征稿．请你根据征稿启事写篇英语短文投稿．

注意：1．词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
My Dream Classroom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The classroom is another home where we spend most of our daytime．教室是另一我们白天大部分时间都在在那里度过的一个家．
高分句型二：
Of course，I would appreciate it if I would be allowed to decorate my own desk．
当然，如果能够允许我自己装饰我的课桌，我将不胜感激．
句型一 where we spend most of our daytime 该句是一个由where作关系副词引导的定语从句，where在句中充当地点状语
句型二 I would appreciate it if I would be allowed…该句主要考查it的用法，it在句中充当形式宾语，真正的宾语由if引导的条件状语充当

解答 My Dream Classroom
    The classroom is another home where we spend most of our daytime．（高分句型一）It should be a comfortable and relaxing place full of inspiration and encouragement for us to enjoy our study life to the fullest． In my dream classroom，I hope to see green plants and pleasant decorations．Of course，I would appreciate it if I would be allowed to decorate my own desk．（高分句型二）（提出期望）
  When it comes to the learning environment of the calssroom，I prefer a culture corner so that we can share our books or exchange our opinions during the refreshing time．Besides，some inspiring mottos inside can motivate us to get ahead．（环境描述）

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