Question

8月3日云南地震牵动着全国人们的心，某报社准备招募40名志愿者前往云南救助伤者。假如你是李华，某医学院的学生，你为云南痛心，看到很多人不顾个人安危救死扶伤，你十分感动，也想当一名志愿者。请根据下面的广告写一封应聘信。

We are now recruiting 40 volunteers to go to Yunnan, an earthquake-stricken area in need of your help. Please give them a hand. Qualifications: Male, between 18 and 35 years of age; Determined, brave, kind, calm; In good health Good knowledge of first aid and mountainous life

注意：1. 词数 100左右；注意使用应聘信的常用词语；

2. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from your newspaper that you are recruiting 40 volunteers to help the earthquake victims in Yunnan.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from your newspaper that you are recruiting 40 volunteers to help the earthquake victims in Yunnan. I was sorry for Yunnan. Seeing so many kind people carrying out rescue work regardless of the danger, I was moved to tears. I want to apply for the job.

I am a 19-year-old medical school student. Born into a poor mountainous family, I had to cover several kilometers of mountainous path to go to school, so I am determined, brave and in good health. As a medical student, I am calm in face of difficulties and dangers. So I am fit for the job.

I would appreciate it if I am admitted. In that case, I will try my best to do my job well.

I’m looking forward to you reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给广告写一封应聘信，表达自己想成为一名志愿者并为云南地震灾区的人民做一些力所能及的事的愿望。词数在100词左右，注意使用应聘信的常用语；开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了非谓语动词、固定句型等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：非谓语动词①Seeing so many kind people carrying out rescue work，②Born into a poor mountainous family；固定句型I would appreciate it if I am admitted.等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用so, as a medical student, in that case等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了regardless of, apply for, have to, in face of, be fit for, try one’s best to do, look forward to doing等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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