Question

3．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
One morning，M．Hare was running on the road．Suddenly he saw Mr．Tortoise，who was also running on the road towards him．Mr．Hare an up to Mr．Tortoise and laughed at him．Mr．Tortoise got angry and wouldn't take failure lying down，so he suggested having a ace to see who could first get to the big tall tree by the roadsides．Mr．Hare agreed with him without hesitation．The race began．Mr．Hare and Mr．Tortoise stated from the same line at the same time．When Mr．Hare was far ahead couldn't catch up with him．So he stopped and lay down to have a nap．But soon he feel sleep．At the same time．Mr．Tortoise kept on running．When Mr．Hare woke up，he found Mr．Tortoise had already sat under the tree and was smiling at him．
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括本文的主要内容；
2．然后以约120个字写一篇记叙文，描写你或你的朋友骄傲而落后的一次经历，并包括以下要点．
A．谈谈这则故事经人的启示；
B．叙述你的朋友因骄傲而落后的一次真实或虚构的经历
C．谈谈这次经历对你或你的朋友思想态度的影响
[写作要求]
1．可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构组织故事，但不得引用原文中的句子；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：lie down （躺下），have a nap（小睡），as a result（所以），take th seriously（认真对待某事），keep a modest attitude towards（采取一个谦虚的态度），be well prepared for （充分准备），listen to the teacher attentively（认真听老师讲课），far behind（落后），from then on（从那时起）．
【高分句型一】
1．The day I came first in the English exam was the happinest day of my life．
此处是由省略了关系副词"that"的定语从句，先行词为"The day"． 定语从句中不缺少主、宾、表等成分．
【高分句型二】
2．①When the teacher announced that I was the first，I felt so proud②that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer．
①此处是由连词"When"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"I felt so proud that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer"．
②此处是由连词"that"引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中由"and"引导了两个并列句．
【高分句型三】
3．During the following few months，I didn't listen to the teacher attentively in class and never did I do my homework after class．
此处是由部分倒装句型，结构为"否定词never+一般疑问句形式的句子"．

解答 Pride goes before failure
   The folktale mainly tells us that in a race Mr．Hare proudly thought he would be sure the best Mr．Tortoise and so he lay down to have a nap．As a result，he lost the race．（概括）
   From the story，we learn that we must take everything seriously and keep a modest attitude towards our students or work．Besides，we shouldn't be proud at any time．（启示）
   The day I came first in the English exam was the happinest day of my life．【高分句型一】I had studied very diligently for many weeks and was well prepared for the exam．When the teacher announced that I was the first，I felt so proud that I thought my English was already excellent enough and I didn't need to study English hard any longer．【高分句型二】During the following few months，I didn't listen to the teacher attentively in class and never did I do my homework after class．【高分句型三】In the next exam，the result was quite different．I felt far behind．（经历）
   From then on，I became modest and never proud again．（个人观点---影响）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．