Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感兴趣；

2. 你打算参加的原因；

3. 询问相关信息。

注意：1．词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m from Hongxing Middle School, Beijing, China. I have heard about the summer camp for international students offered by your university. I am very interested in the project.

I have been looking for opportunities to experience campus life in the UK, which will definitely help improve my English and deepen my understanding of the English culture. Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about the upcoming project in your university.

I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information. First, what activities will be included in the summer camp? Apart from this, I also want to know the exact time and fee for the camp.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意申请参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感兴趣；2. 你打算参加的原因；3. 询问相关信息。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear about(听说)；the summer camp (夏令营)；be interested in(感兴趣)；look for(寻找)；deepen (加深)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成进行时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。