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2．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信．她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落．请你给她回信，内容如下：
（1）向Jenny表示问候和安慰（你的同学和你面临同样的问题，所以不必过于担心）；
（2）针对她的问题提出以下建议：
①放学后邀请同学一起参加活动，这有助于你们互相更好地了解；
②你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们；
③你遇到困难时向同学求助．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：参加take part in
Dear Jenny，I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
Bestwishes，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信．她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落．请你给她回信，内容如下：1．向Jenny表示问候和安慰（你的同学和你面临同样的问题，所以不必过于担心）；2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：（1）放学后邀请同学一起参加活动，这有助于你们互相更好地了解；（2）你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们；（3）你遇到困难时向同学求助．语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．
【亮点说明】There is also something that you can do to change this situation．运用定语从句；This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．运用比较级；Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．运用时间状语从句；You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次．
You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）
Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
       I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．