Question

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10 处错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（夷），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2援只充许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起） 不计分．
    Today is Tom's 70th birthday，but there is anybody with him．He feels very disappointing．His sons didn't care for him on this special day．Although the cakes are very delicious，but he doesn't want to touch it．He just wants his children come and see him．Nowadays，many young people are so busy and independent which they seldom visit their parents．But blood is thick than water．Our dear parents brought us up for a lot of difficulty．Thus，we should and must bring happy to them when they become old．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字通过讲述Tom七十岁的生日，孩子们没把这个特殊的日子记心上，留下Tom一人孤独地面对蛋糕的事情，告诉我们血浓于水，记着父母养育我们的艰辛，父母老了，要多回家看看，带给他们幸福和快乐．

解答 Today is Tom's 70th birthday，but there is anybody with him．He feels very disappointing．His sons didn't care for him
                                                                 nobody                                       disappointed                 dodn't
on this special day．Although the cakes are very delicious，but he doesn't want to touch it．He just wants his children∧come
                                                                                       去掉but                              them                                     to
and see him．Nowadays，many young people are so busy and independent whichthey seldom visit their parents．But blood 
                                                                                                               that
is thick than water．Our dear parents brought us up fora lot of difficulty．Thus，we should and must bring happy to them when
   thicker                                                               with                                                                           happiness
they become old．

1．anybody改为nobody；考查不定代词，根据句意应当是"汤姆的70岁生日没人跟他在一起"故用nobody．
2．disappointing改为disappointed；考查分词做形容词，现在分词做形容词修饰物，描述事物的性质，过去分词做形容词修饰人，形容
     人的心理状态．
3．didn't改为don't；考查时态，结合上文时态，这里应该用一般现在时．
4．去掉but；考查连词，although不能与but连用，所以去掉but．
5，it改为them；考查代词，这里them指代前面的cakes．
6．come前面加to；考查不定式，want sb to do．
7．which改为that；考查结果状语从句，这里so…that…是固定结构，意为"如此…以至于"．
8．thick改为thicker；考查比较级，句子中有比较级的标志性单词than．
9．for改为with；考查介词，这里意思是"父母经历了很多困难吧我们养大"．with a lot of difficulty是介词短语做状语．
10．happy改为happiness；考查名词，根据句意"当父母老了我们应该带给他们幸福"可知这里应该用名词形式．

点评 短文改错首先要通读全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式结构，弄清句子间的结构关系，然后运用所掌握的语法，词汇等基本知识找
出错误加以改正．