Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以

下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或

修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

One day a child was play with a vase of great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried,he could not pull it out. His father tried his best,too,but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said, "Now,my son,why have one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out straight as you saw I doing,and then pull.” To his surprise,the child says, "I can't hold my fingers straight like that,be?cause I don't want to drop my penny. ”Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world's worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.

Answer 1

One day a child was play with a vase of great value.

playing He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried,he could carelessly not pull it out. His father tried his best,too,but their ef?forts were in \ vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said, "Now,my son,why A have when not one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out and straight as you saw i doing,and then pull.”To his sur-me prise,the child says ,"i can't hold my fingers straight like said that,because i don't want to drop my penny." Thousand of Thousands us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world's worthless holding penny that we cannot achieve liberation.