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第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
下面的柱状图（bar chart）显示了不同年龄段孩子心理健康状况。
根据上图信息，请以“Psychological problems of students”为题，用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下：
1. 简要描述图中信息；
2. 说明原因（学业压力，缺乏引导……）；
3. 谈谈你的看法。
注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。
As is shown in the bar chart,                                                   

Answer 1

As is shown in the bar chart, there are more and more health problems existing among students.
It’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.
　 Undoubtedly, schools should take the responsibilities of guaranteeing students’ psychological health. Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it. For example, there should be a psychological counseling (咨询) hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.
Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools. To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind. Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the internet should definitely be avoided.

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