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12．进入高三以后，很多学校都取消了体育锻炼．对此情况，有人赞同有人反对．关于这一话题，你们在班上进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论情况用英语写出来．
赞成的人认为：1．浪费时间； 2．…．
反对的人认为：1．可以使人放松； 2．…．
你的看法：…
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．首句已给出，不计入总词数．
We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Grade 3should take physical exercise．
                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息进入高三以后，很多学校都取消了体育锻炼．对此情况，有人赞同有人反对．关于这一话题，你们在班上进行了激烈的讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从正反观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take exercise做锻炼；build up our body强身健体；Besides另外；However然而；a waste of time浪费时间；In addition另外；Personally就个人而言；keep fit保持健康；
Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）
They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）
In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）

解答 We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise．Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）Besides，it makes us completely relaxed after long-time study in classroom．
      However，the other students are against taking regular exercise．They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）
      Personally，we need to take physical exercise on a regular basis to keep fit because nothing is more important than good health．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．