Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。你校即将举办"我和我的祖国"英语演讲比赛。请给你校外籍教师James 写一封电子邮件，告知他演讲比赛的有关内容，并邀请他当评委。

要点包括：

1. 比赛的时间和地点；

2. 举办此活动的目的和意义；

3. 诚挚邀请他担任评委。

注意：1.词数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear James,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. James,

I’m Li Hua, chairman of Student Union. I'm writing to inform you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall next Friday and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.

The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and I" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility. What’s more, inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.

We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，告知外籍教师James演讲比赛的有关内容，并邀请他当评委。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表明写信目的

2.介绍比赛的相关情况

1）比赛的时间和地点。（time and place）

2）举办此活动的目的和意义。（purpose and meaning）

3) 诚挚邀请他担任评委。（invitation）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

inform; would like to do; intend to do; patriotic enthusiasm; a sense of responsibility; as well as; make contributions to; appreciate; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm writing to inform you that...

2. The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and I" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility.

3. students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.

4. We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.

5. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改