Question

【题目】假定你是宝鸡中学学生会主席李华，学校将举行一次77周年校庆作品展示（exhibition），请你用英语写一则作品征集启事。要点如下：

1. 作品主题：反映校园生活，表达祝福；

2. 作品形式：诗词、照片、画作等；

3. 截止日期：9月1日。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

With the 77th anniversary of our school approaching_____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

With the 50th anniversary of our school approaching, we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor. We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday.

We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you. Besides, you can write Chinese poems, sharing your sweet experiences of school life. Paintings are also preferred. Whatever your works are, they will show your talents on such a special occasion. More importantly, it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life. Please send in your works before September 1st.

We really appreciate everyone’s active participation.

【解析】试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

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