Question

12．假定你是李华，暑假参加了澳大利亚游学活动，回国后给host family写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：
1．感谢他们一家的照顾；
2．分享游学体会；
3．询问你寄的礼物（汉语词典）是否收到；
4．邀请他们一家来中国游览．
注意：1．词数100左右．
 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Helen，
        ．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是常见书信类作文，首先，要注意书信的格式；其次，作文要包含所有要点，并根据所给要点进行适当的展开；最后，表示感谢的同时送上自己美好的祝愿．
时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称．
高分句型：
①It was your help and kindness that made my stay in you country so enjoyable．
It was…that…强调句的使用，突出表达了help and kindness
 ②And by communicating with you as well as other locals，I practiced my oral english so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now．
 as well as 短语：以及，还；
so…that…如此…以至于…
as fluently as  像…一样流利
③What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got．
感叹句的使用强调 这次经历的意义所在．
④I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning．
固定句型be+of+名词．对…有所帮助．

解答 Dear Helen，
     I'v arrived home safe and sound．I miss you so much，and how i want to say"thank you'to your whole famiy．①It was your help and kindness that made my stay in you country so enjoyable．
    The beautiful scenery and rich traditional Australian culture impressed me a lot．②And by communicating with you as well as other locals，I practiced my oral english so often that I can speak as fluently as a native speaker now．③What a meaningful and unforgettable experience I have got．
    Have you received the chinese dictionary？It is a gift for you．④I hope it will be of help to you in Chinese learning．I'm keenly expecting you to China soon．
   Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考生在写作之前首先要认真审题，内容要全部包括在写作中．句式表达要在正确的同时，尽量用高级句型来增加文章的档次，要求考生在平时多积累高级词汇和句型．