Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你得知你的朋友 Peter最近打算节食减肥。请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：

1. 表示理解；

2. 你的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I hear you are going to be on a diet to lose weight. I quite understand you because you’re always complaining about being overweight. And the following are my opinions.

Undoubtedly, a proper diet can help you lose weight and enjoy a healthier life. However, an extremely strict diet can be harmful to your health. To efficiently lose weight, I think the best way is to take exercise regularly, which helps consume calories. If you burn more calories than you take in each day, you will lose weight. In addition, keeping a balanced diet is also important. Do remember not to eat too much for a meal.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信：假定你是李华，你得知你的朋友 Peter最近打算节食减肥。请你用英语给他写一封信。内容包括：1.表示理解；2.你的建议。人称使用第一、第二人称，时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on a diet to lose weight (节食减肥)；complaining about being overweight (抱怨增重)；a proper diet can help you lose weight (适当的饮食可以帮助你减肥)；be harmful to your health (对你的健康有害)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。