Question

假定你是红星中学高一某班学习委员，你常看到你班有很多同学抄袭作业，针对这种现象，你将在下周的班会上组织全班同学进行讨论，并以“My opinion on copying others' homework”为主题作中心发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

发言稿须包括以下内容要点：

1. 抄袭的主要原因；

2. 抄袭的危害及解决办法；

3. 简要表明自己的态度。

注意：

1. 词数不多于120 字；

2. 发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

May I have your attention, please?

My topic today is about copying others' homework. As we know, some students copy others' homework.

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Answer 1

May I have your attention, please?

My topic today is about copying others' homework. As we know, some students copy others' homework for some reasons. On the one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems which are too hard to work out. On the other hand, some students are too lazy to finish their homework. In order to please their parents and teachers, they form the habit of copying others’ homework.

Personally, I think copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it is against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability to think.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求以“My opinion on copying others' homework”为主题，针对抄作业的现象，用英语写一篇发言稿。写作要点包括：抄袭的主要原因；抄袭的危害及解决办法；自己的态度等三个方面。词数在120词左右，开头不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、非谓语动词、条件状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：定语从句which are too hard to work out；非谓语动词①Being students，②copying others’ homework too often；条件句If we have difficulties等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用on the one hand, sometimes, on the other hand, personally, for one thing, for another等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了both...and, too...to, in order to, form the habit of, work hard, turn to sb for help等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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