Question

升入高中后的第一个寒假即到来。为了让同学们都能过上一个充实而有意义的假期，你向班级同学发起了倡议。请根据以下内容要点写一篇词数为100词左右的文章。文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

要点: 1. 注重体验：用手中的画笔和照相机记录下社会中的美与丑。

2. 注重尝试：帮父母做一道菜；做家教辅导低年级学生学习等。

3. 你的打算......

参考词汇： 画笔：a paintbrush      家教：tutor 

With the approaching of the first winter vacation in senior high, I call on all my classmates to enjoy a fulfilled and instructive holiday.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the approaching of the first winter vacation in senior high, I call on all my classmates to enjoy a fulfilled and instructive holiday.  First, learn to experience. With our paintbrushes and cameras we can take the streets, drawing and photographing what we see. Good or bad phenomena as we may see, we will always believe society is developing better and better. Second, learn to have a try. As winter vacation provides us with more free time, why not have a try at cooking? Enjoying the food cooked by ourselves, you are sure to feel the pride and happiness. Besides, being a tutor will also bring us a lot---- most treasured experience and some pocket money. What’s more, start reading books, which will broaden the range of your knowledge. So, my dear classmates, work out your holiday plans and I'm sure you will have an unforgettable vacation.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是应用文中常见的倡议书。话题是让同学们都能过上一个充实而有意义的假期有很强的可写性，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点。

考点：考查英文倡议书的写法

点评：本文是一封倡议书。具有很强的可写性，内容贴近考生的实际情况，考生有话可说，有话可写。在写作的过程中要注意使用合适的连接词如，同时也要注意使用一些高级的解析如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。