Question

假如你是李华，你打算暑假后到英国某人学读书，请你向该大学招生办公室主任Mr．Smith写—封电子邮件，申请入学资格。

内容包括：

1．自我介绍（包括英语水平及其个人优势）；

2．申请理由（①学习深造；②拓宽视野，传播中国文化）；

3．希望获得批准。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Best wishes,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mr.Smith,

I’m Li Hua,a student of Senior 3 from China.I want to apply to your university.I have a good command of English and can communicate with English-speakers freely.I have a quick mind so I did well in all my subjects,especially the science courses.

The reason why I want to apply to your university can be listed as follows.To begin with,I want to further my study in an English-speaking country.Besides,I want to broaden my horizons by learning the culture of your country,and spread Chinese culture at the same time.

I will be very grateful if I could be accepted.And I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。先审题，弄清写作要求，审题是写好作文的前提，理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。提醒考生注意时态及语态的使用。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如have a good command of, communicate with; I will be very grateful if I could be accepted 引导的条件状语从句及why引导的定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：To begin with , Besides等等。

考点：提纲作文。