Question

【题目】假定你是张华，上学期你作为交换（exchange）生去美国学习，住在Smith 夫妇家里，回国后发现你的一本笔记本遗留在他们家，请根据以下内容用英语给Smith先生写一封100字左右的电子邮件。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

要点如下：1. 表示对他们的感谢；2. 这本笔记本对你很重要；3. 麻烦他们寄回。

Dear Mr Smith,

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Yours,

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Smith,

Firstly I must say thanks to you and your wife, Mrs Smith, for your warm accommodation during my stay in your home last term. As an exchange student, I’ve learnt a lot about American culture and improved my spoken English greatly with your help.

Now I’m writing to bother you just because I left a notebook in your home. The notebook is very important for me because it was a gift from my mother on my 15th birthday, in which I have written down many magnificent moments in my life.

I’d appreciate it if you would like to send it back to my school.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文，内容是用英语写一封邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4、注意邮件格式。

【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如定语从句he notebook is very important for me because it was a gift from my mother on my 15th birthday, in which I have written down many magnificent moments in my life.状语从句I’d appreciate it if you would like to send it back to my school.等