Question

最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

1.你校开展课外活动的情况；

2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处

3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议

4. 为学校开展课外活动提出建议

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名

3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）

                          After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

   Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.From joozone.com.

   Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.

【解析】本作文为提纲式的稿件文章，立意为鼓励学生积极参加课外活动，这个话题考生比较熟悉，有话可说，有感可写。根据所给提纲，学生的写作思路会比较清晰，分别从开展课外活动的情况、益处、为同学选择提建议以及为学校开展活动提建议，框架清晰，思路明确。主要考察学生英语的基本功和组织自己观点、给出理由进行阐述的能力，考查范围比较综合。提纲式作文要注意文章之间的逻辑关系，比如这篇文章中因果关系的阐述，考生不宜直接堆砌观点，要有理有据，文章的承转得当，长短句结合，综合多种语法和丰富词汇的选择，在不遗漏要点的情况下适当发挥，给出合理化的原因和建议。总的来说，今年四川卷的作文中规中矩，考察面广，不仅考察考生的语言水平，也考察了行文构思和逻辑。