Question

书面表达 (满分25分)

临近毕业，部分高三学生对未来从事什么工作感到迷茫，你班将以“我的理想职业”为主题开一个班会 。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇发言稿。

1. 未来的职业，如：医生、教师、演员等；

2. 选择的理由；

3. 实现理想的途径。

注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100-120左右

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好， 但不计入总词数。

Good afternoon , everyone,

It’s great pleasure for me to be here today and share my dream career with you. I hope to be

 

 

 

Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

Good afternoon , everyone,

It’s great pleasure for me to be here today and share my dream career with you. I hope to be a teacher. As a teacher , I will stay with young students , who are always energetic and have new ideas, so I will keep updating what I have learned. Besides, teaching is a job where teachers teach knowledge and educate students, which is increasingly important , and so is the teachers’ position. That is why I love to be a teacher.

To be a qualified teacher, I will study hard to equip myself with relevant knowledge and do more teaching practice. My fellow classmates, please remember whatever job we choose, it will help society function well, so choosing a suitable for us is the most important. Let’s make great efforts to realize our dreams.

 

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇发言稿，开头结尾已经给出，所以只注意组织好篇章结构和要点的表述即可。其中要点包括：1. 未来的职业，如：医生、教师、演员等；2. 选择的理由；3. 实现理想的途径。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，语言风格符合发言稿类的文体要求，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少.如: share my dream career with you和你们分享我的理想职业, As a teacher 作为一名老师，make great efforts 做出巨大努力等；还使用了定语从句I will stay with young students , who are always energetic and have new ideas.表语从句That is why I love to be a teacher. 祈使句Let’s make great efforts to realize our dreams.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

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