Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。自从进入高三以后，你发现部分同学晚上学习到很晚。他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法。

注意：(1) 可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(2) 词数：100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a high school student who will graduate next year. Since I entered Grade Three, I have found that some students in our class study harder than before. They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-cola, which is bad for their health, and even leads to many students becoming fatter and fatter. In the morning, due to staying up too late, some students are not able to get up in time and often have to go to school without breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do great harm to their health.

In my opinion, important as studies are, health should also be taken seriously. Faced with such heavy study pressure, not only should we try to eat in a healthy way, but we should also get as much rest as possible. Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.

I wonder if you agree with me. I m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一片书信类作文，请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法。写作时需要注意：1.切忌主客不分或模糊. 2.句子不要凌碎. 3.结构对称,令人容易理解4.单众数不要搞乱,不然会好刺眼,看不舒服5.动词主词要呼应 6.时态和语气不要转变太多.

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，用了较多的经典句式，比如： I am a high school student who will graduate next year.是一个定语从句，hey study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-cola, which is bad for their health是一个非限制性定语从句，important as studies are, health should also be taken seriously.用了被动语态，Only in this way can we keep fit and study well用了倒装句。